I've now finished reviewing storyline 3 of 4 (Xavier Ansovald, our human janissary). This was one of the longer storylines at 20,000 words (the other being Gemini Prasad, which I have also reviewed), so the last one, Narayana Prasad, should take less time. It was also the last storyline I worked on, and the one I'm happiest with, so it should not require a great deal of chopping and changing.
Once I've got my shit together I'll post an excerpt on here. In the meantime, back to the coalface.